It makes me wonder & makes me sigh
How things can change with a blink of an eye
How the ones who claimed to bring us stars
Do not care to stand under the same star spangled sky
Words are still exchanged, sans feelings though
Conversation is a mere punctilio
There’s hardly anything to say or hear
The story seems to have lost its brio
Sentiments get replaced
By a thinking, active brain
Emotions no more matter
Pragmatism & indifference reign
Not that it should matter
Or affect us or our life at all
But what do we do of this headless heart
Why does it, in love ever fall?
Probably, it's time to mind our hearts!!
Blessed Be,
Meow
6 comments:
nice piece of work, very sad types...my types...lol...
Mind your heart...hmmmmmmmm. That's hard!
welldone!
The one thing I could never do.. condense thoughts into a Poem. :)
I like it Meow. I really like your poetry. The first two lines are magic.
And great play on words...Mind our hearts.
Namaste
Peggy
@everything burns: Thanks Jahnabi, it's my types too :)
@Caroline: It indeed is one of the hardest things, trust me..
@Serendipity: Thanks for visiting Ms. Serendipity :) Writing a poem is not that hard - Think of anything you wanna write about & then forcibly try & rhyme the last words :P..Give it a try
@miruspeg: Thanks Peggy, God Bless
very touching and true!
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